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« on: November 28, 2009, 04:55:42 PM »

Mein kaun ho kaise batao aap sab ko,
Koshish karti ho shayad aap samjh paaye..

Jab sardi ho to gunguni si dhoop hoon mein,
Ho agar garmi to sheetal pawan hoon mein,

Sookhe se tadap rahi jameen ke liye barsaat mein,
Thake hare sharer ke liye hoon raat mein,

Ho agar koi gamm to sahara hoon mein,
Aur kabhi kaali raat ka chamkta taara hoon mein,

Bechi hui jaagir ya phir kharidi hui cheez hoon mein,
Kabhi thehri mayoos to kabhi dhaara hoon mein,

Aangan me khila ek phool hoon mein,
Kabhi khushi to kabhi ek nadan bhool hoon mein,

Gusse ki wajah to kabhi narazgi ka kissa hoon mein,
Shayad aankh ka aansoo, dil ka dard hoon mein,

Maa ki ladli, duniya aur baap ki thukrayi hui hoon mein,
Shayad ek beti, bahu, biwi, behan, ya phir sirf Aurat hoon mein.

Shally.
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« Reply #1 on: November 29, 2009, 02:14:32 AM »

Wah Shally wah sach me jawab nahi tumhara waqt ke sath sath kya nikhaar aaya tumhari kalem me. Kitni khoobsurti se tumne Aurat Zaat ka varnan kiya hain. Bohat khushi hui tumhare is kalam ko padh kar dil se dad kabool ho... claps
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Itni shiddat se chaha maine kato ko
Koi Phool jo chu lu to chubhan hoti hain

Mere shero me chupa hain mera Ghayel wajood
Main likhta nahi mere zakhmo par kalem roti hain

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« Reply #2 on: November 30, 2009, 01:50:51 PM »

bahut achha likha hai Shally ji..
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क्यों मुझे अचानक ये एहसास हुआ है,
मेरी दुनिया में सबकुछ बदल सा गया है...

हर तरफ खामोशी क्यों नज़र आने लगी है अब,
फैला चारों तरफ मेरे ही अरमानो का धुआँ है..!!
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« Reply #3 on: November 30, 2009, 04:26:33 PM »

I am short of words for this masterpiece of yours Shally...

Its Intense, Excellent.. Too Good... Really, I feel short of words for this amazing creation of yours...  claps  claps  claps  claps

Well Done... Keep It Up..  thumbsup
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« Reply #4 on: November 30, 2009, 06:54:42 PM »

Very nice Shally.... claps I got the below one in a mail.. Smiley


AURAT

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Mein Kahani Kyunkar Likhou??

Mein Kahani Kis Par Likhoun??

Bezubaan Kar Di Gayi Hai Aurat !!

Sach Kahoun Ya Jhoot Likhoun...

Kache Dhagoun Par Aurat Ka Haq

Rona Roun Ya Phir Haq Likhoun ? ?

Binn Mout Kyun Maari Jaati Hai Aurat ? ? ? ? ?  ? ?

Koi Toh Bataye Mein Kya Likhoun ? ? ?

Kore Kagaz Pe Qalam Tikaye Sonch Rahi Hoon ...

Aurat Kya Hai ? ? ?

Chalo Aaj AURAT Likhoun

AURAT  Wafa Ka Paiker

AURAT  Mohabbat Ki Murat

Dastan-E-Hayath Se Kyunker AURAT  Qarijj Likhoun

Mein Nahi.....

Ab Khud Batayegi AURAT..

Kya Hai Woh Usse Mein Kaise Aur Kya Likhoun? ? ? ? ?
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क्यों मुझे अचानक ये एहसास हुआ है,
मेरी दुनिया में सबकुछ बदल सा गया है...

हर तरफ खामोशी क्यों नज़र आने लगी है अब,
फैला चारों तरफ मेरे ही अरमानो का धुआँ है..!!
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« Reply #5 on: December 02, 2009, 10:11:42 AM »

 claps claps
Very nice lines shally

Very nice sharing natural ji....
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